Riding at the dunes is really fun, because i could do anything. Like go walking on the beach, bare footed, or riding on the beach or dunes, play football, or even soccer. I had lots of fun this one day, where me, Lindsey, Travis, Jim, Darek and I went riding at the dunes.
We made lots of new trails. First we went on west side of the beach, and we were looking for spots to make trails. Then when we found a spot we would keep going up or down the hill and we would make jumps up the hill. This is called a step up jump. Then we would start jumping it to see who would do the longest jump.
We don't only make step up jumps, we make all kinds of trails. Trails that go through the grass, mud, sand, gravel, and even water. Riding at the dunes is fun, but also dangerous, because of the erosion. And the feeling of jumping in the air is really fun too. You could feel butterflies in your stomach, and the adrenaline. It feels so good because adrenline gets you pumped up, so good you feel like you want to do it some more and jump even higher. And the butterflies feels funny. When you get the buterflies, it make you laugh. But when you jump higher, the butterflie will get stronger, and what next. You will laugh more and harder. Well, thats the feeling of jumping in the air. And one thing thats sucks about jumping is you will get use to the adrenline, and the butterflies.
And what you could smell at the dunes is fresh air. Fresh air smells like fresh grass, fresh air, and fresh water sprinkling on your face. Well, I wish that fresh water sprinkled on my face while I went riding. That would be cool. Well the way it looks is, theres sand and mud on the beach, and on the dunes theres, grass on one side of the dune, and on the other side theres, sand. Oh and theres rocks of course. Thats it for riding at the dunes and you visualizing it. Well, later.
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Allen, this is really looking good. Since it is a narrative (personal story) try to include lots of sensory details: (Sight, Touch, Smell, etc.)
Also, try to describe the feeling you get when you go off a jump or through the air. Try to help the reader experience a day at the dunes with you ok? Just a couple more fixes and this will be all done you did great!
Awsome! Man I can't wait until summer comes...I was kinda fun last year but i hope this year turns out better....how did u check your blog when you're in the old libraury....anyways ima goin to bounce and what ever but yeah...mmmk...later
Well, thanks! But you know, I´m not writing a lot these days, I´m not very inspirated xD
Oh, I guess you had a lot of fun! I´ve never have done that, but it must be fun ^^
Well, I hope you´re fine, see you! :D
Allen, its sooo close to being done. It definitely needs some grammar/spelling fixes. You did a great job with my suggestions. Here's a big test, ask Linda to read it with you and see if she has any suggestions. I can't wait to see the final draft. Put it into word and print it off when you're all done. Have her give it to me or I'll come get it myself.
If you're logged into your blog you can erase my comments also, did you know that?
Also, is this way of talking working for you? Let me know!
You're doing a awesome job, keep it up.
Allen, I haven't done a very good job of visiting you this week. I've been super stressed out with planning for next week. I'm leaving for Anchorage tomorrow (Friday) for a whole week. We can still communicate through your blog and I can give you new ideas to write about. If you ever think of something on your own that you want to write about because you think it is interesting just do it okay?
Next week I'll probably try to have you write about a hard topic, are you up to the challenge?
Here's a clue, its about music and I can knock off one of your phases with it.
Mr. I
p.s. thanks for the cool comment.
I wish summer was around here. i cant wait to go fishing. ahh... nice blog you have allen.
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